All Comments on 'Happy Now!'

This is the most disjointed story I've ever read. At the beginning he says he wants to train the couple to be his slaves, then a few paragraphs later, he turns the wife into a butch lesbian Dom and the man into a woman?? Also, if he had the power to alter reality from the beginning, what was the point of all the candles and hypnosis? I also loved how he said he wonders if they make cock cages that small (implying he would have to buy one), then 2 lines later, magically materializes a whip and collar out of nowhere, then shortly after that, completely alters everything about the couple as a whole. Everything here is completely illogical lol

Kind of a messed up story, that's pretty gay too..

This was really dumb.

What?