All Comments on 'Hawke and his Princess Chapter 16'

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HelgamiteHelgamite28 days ago

"He saw the Captain of his guard and motioned him over, and invited him to sit, after he did, Bryce looked at him. "Tell me everything about Arik and about the fight." And he listened to him."

you going to go in depth with this part on the next one? it bares a brief retelling. would help catch readers up and newer readers as well that didn't read the firsts several chapters.

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Tell something about myself hmm... First of all: I'm a 100% straight female. I love having intelligent conversations, talking about stories, about interests, fantasies, etc. I can be very delightful, love to be playful, definitely feisty but also ornery, stubborn and opinion...