All Comments on 'He Loved Her When She's Geeky...'

It feels as if you submitted it mid story. It was a decently good story but the way it just abruptly ends kills the whole thing

I forgot to wrote the ending to this story, so here it is now. Leah and Ray went out together for the next few years until Leah dropped down on one knee and proposed to him, and he said yes. Leah's pregnant now and they actually asked me to be the kid's godfather, and I agreed.

This is a true story like my other works.

First half was really dope. Loved the geeky girl angle. You changed tense once Leah caught Ray. I think having your Yandere be MIA and not explaining the creeper things she does lessens the impact. With the amount of stimulation written Ray would have nut by then even if he wasn't being stroked as hard.