All Comments on 'Heather Ch. 02'

Excellent story, and well told. I enjoyed the characters and the delicacy with which they handled Heather.

I noticed there were two different times in the opening scene with the girlfriends when Brenda proposed letting Heather try both she and Chris. If you want a proofreader/ editor for the next chapter, I'm happy to volunteer. DM me privately if you'd like. If not, I'll just enjoy the next chapter when it gets published. Thank you for sharing your story with us!

OMG Ashley What a wonderful Story! I love the way the story folded out , Taking time for you To show Heather the joy of enjoying sexual bliss from you and then to Chris.

Nice chapter Ashley! Loved the interaction of the characters and the lovely descriptions. This chapter really carried me away to the commune! Keep up the good work!

Oh, yes..experimenting to find “yourself”….. and your preference!

Both good exercises!

Thanks for this !

What a LOVELY 1st time, giving her a taste of each, and you paint a beautiful brief picture of her teen body, ESP her natural muffin...her orgasm with Brenda prepping and lubing her nicely for Chris's large chubby

Easy 5 and fave, and looking forward to your other stories