All Comments on 'Heidi Seeks Pt. 10'

by Pocketrocket2

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Disappointed

Don't get me wrong, I love this story and got my cum flying everywhere, but as I type this it's been almost 11 months since this part was written. Have you lost your mojo? Maybe you need some inspiration from your muse you talk of.

Pocketrocket2Pocketrocket2over 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for your comment and I agree, so if my muse reads this she really should email me as we've lost touch lately and I'm desperate to hear from her again. Wanking just isn't the same without her input.

sjoshProud2ServeUMaamVAsjoshProud2ServeUMaamVAover 3 years ago

Like i said it was a Great Read, but in reality One Story, Maybe three Stories split up, I remember from English Lit that i took in College that i really never liked "Short Stories" as almost all of these Ten Part Stories Were.

But that's "how the cookie crumbles" or as the French say "C'est La Vie"! I do remember going to School in both England and Scotland so I know all about "wanking", Or as Jethro Tull said "Thick As A Brick"! I didn't continue to comment about the shortness of the chapters but every time it did agitate me immensely.

Keep Writing, obviously perhaps "Longer Stories" Please ??

sjoshProud2ServeUMaamVAsjoshProud2ServeUMaamVAover 3 years ago

So where the heck is part 11, They are not dated but I thought or assumed, shouldn't do it I know. that this was a few years Old! But Maybe not, nobody is perfect Thank God for that.

AfrinelAfrinelover 2 years ago

Où se trouve la partie 11 ?

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