All Comments on 'Held Accountable: AEquitas Pt. 02'

Halloo Just Jake,

I think the idea of your story is very good.

Only at some point in the course of the story the thread to the story is missing.

They suddenly start inviting Pepe to a club where he sees his slap wife on stage getting fucked.

But why this happened, how she was made submissive by Tashas and Dave, what happened at the company parties with customer care or Vegas.

What happened at the parties in Vegas or in the time in between where Donazu Haus was taking care of clients at parties they don't tell us. This is it nevertheless which of your readers intressiert.

Therefore, I can not give you a five.

Maybe you can change this in one of your next stories.

I hope that in a following story Miranda will appear again and the sluts will fuck the customers of the company.

The approach of your stories is good please consider my suggestions and I am convinced that two days after publication your stories will have a grade well above four.

Halloo Just Jake,

I think the idea of your story is very good.

Only at some point in the course of the story the thread to the story is missing.

They suddenly start inviting Pepe to a club where he sees his slap wife on stage getting fucked.

But why this happened, how she was made submissive by Tashas and Dave, what happened at the company parties with customer care or Vegas.

What happened at the parties in Vegas or in the time in between where Donazu Haus was taking care of clients at parties they don't tell us. This is it nevertheless which of your readers intressiert.

Therefore, I can not give you a five.

Maybe you can change this in one of your next stories.

I hope that in a following story Miranda will appear again and the sluts will fuck the customers of the company.

The approach of your stories is good please consider my suggestions and I am convinced that two days after publication your stories will have a grade well above four.

Love the story. Hope to see Miranda and her two daughters as well as Tasha and Brittany at the next DeLuca Marketing and Promotion company event in the Robbins’ basement. The connection between the two “Held Accountable” stories demands further integration. You have detailed the transformation of Miranda in the other story and Donna in this story. Now to address the transformation of Miranda’s two daughters and Tasha’s daughter Brittany. Despite the fact that all the female characters are or are becoming insatiable for cock and pussy, Miranda and her husband, and Donna and Pete, are somehow very appealing characters. The twists in the plot are very engaging and keep the reader always wondering what will come next. And, of course, the sex and BDSM scenes are incredibly erotic. Please keep writing.

Hope to see a Part 3, where the two stories come together. Fabulous stories.

I love all your stories. Keep continuing them. This story ended but just opened an exciting new chapter which I hope you will continue to write.

Your stories are too good for them to be anything except lengthy series. Your characters are amazing and deserve more description of their adventures.

Keep the chapters coming, please.