All Comments on 'Helen's Story Pt. 01'

"I suggest you read "VALENTINES DAY" before reading this."

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Logically, if this was that important, it should have been the synopsis instead of "A wife's journey." so people know this BEFORE opening the story. I can only presume it's because you don't give a fuck about your own story.

Probably the most pointless thing I’ve read today.

Unfortunately not enough content - you sayin’ it’s a sequel to a story from 5 weeks ago.

And then you already began another chain story with chapter 1 (LAD01) 3 weeks ago.

Short story puzzle bits combined with too long intervals and no really interesting/compelling story line (a description of some fucks does usually not suffice for a story) .

My suggestion: Write your story, include emotion and drama, erase unnecessary clutter and post it in one piece. You can write well, so make it interesting for the readers.