All Comments on 'Helen's Story Pt. 01'

Unfortunately not enough content - you sayin’ it’s a sequel to a story from 5 weeks ago.

And then you already began another chain story with chapter 1 (LAD01) 3 weeks ago.

Short story puzzle bits combined with too long intervals and no really interesting/compelling story line (a description of some fucks does usually not suffice for a story) .

My suggestion: Write your story, include emotion and drama, erase unnecessary clutter and post it in one piece. You can write well, so make it interesting for the readers.

Probably the most pointless thing I’ve read today.

"I suggest you read "VALENTINES DAY" before reading this."

.

Logically, if this was that important, it should have been the synopsis instead of "A wife's journey." so people know this BEFORE opening the story. I can only presume it's because you don't give a fuck about your own story.