All Comments on 'Helgate Manor Pt. 01'

Can't wait for the update

A bit of plot checking required. She could not drive away because she left her car keys in her purse inside the manor, and the car was locked. Yet when waiting for her boyfriend she locked herself in her car and fell asleep.

Thank you for pointing out that plot hole. An edited version has been submitted to fix that.

The plot hole still exists.