All Comments on 'Helper's Gift'

that was brilliant you must do more i could do with an elf like that

That you've just opened a portal of loyal followers who will want more?

I love being able to say, "I told you so."

Great story and I am awaiting the next installment.

*Kiss*

Very good writing ... please don't stop.

Naughty naughty.... from such a plucky ducky.

Always, Lizzy

She sure had *me* hypnotized, and so did you! Wow! Great story! Good luck! :)

stands by itself but it could be explored a bit more?? please

IMHO, it was a fluid, graceful, fun read. I thought you did an especially good job with descriptions and setting. Good luck in the contest.

Rumple

A different take on sisterly love with a knowing elf as the catalist. Well done, good job CD

I am awestruck! Extraordinarily well written....good luck in the contest

Happy Holidays & good luck in the contest. ~Imp

and naughty! Just what I like.

I can't tell you how much I perked up seeing you listed as the author, and then to discover it was a story about identical twins, mmmm!

Please, please, please, don't leave it here. I want to find out more about the rings, and I love the idea of twin protagonists, feeling their power, seducing women, and loving each other in perfect unity the whole time.

Oh, and Miriam was HOT! No wonder time stops when she's around. :)

Very intriguing... a pleasure to read.

Best of luck in the contest!

for a very entertaining, sexy story.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

All of your mind control stories display a deft touch Cd. And this one is in rarefied air. Excellent control of the aspects of reality/unreality and the juxtapose of what you know and what you are experiencing. For someone who stumbles through stories in the genre, it's a treat to see such a masterful work from the pen of a freind. Mery Christmas

-Colly

Please send that elf to my house ASAP! Fun story and hot too. Good luck!

Cookie :)

and why doesn't she cum to my house?? Great story!!

~Honey

I'm setting up elf traps around the house this year. What a delightfully naughty tale!!!

Loved it.

Abs.

Nice blend of not so typical elements.

Christ! I want Miriam under my tree! Damn fine job, CD!

I'm about as heterosexual as they come, but I must admit I felt and appreciated the erotic qualities of this story. You did a wonderful job, CD! Technically a very sound story; erotically... muy caliente. Thank you for the excellent read!

but somewhat confusing.

Great story

My goodness, that was yummy! I can see why this goes under mind control, I couldn't stop reading it! Love it!

This was a wonderful story. Although I'm not a big fan of incest, the story details and your girl on girl sex was incredible! I would love to see this filmed. Great Job!

thought provoking and provocative in other ways as well. I hope you keep writing.

The word "Twinception" comes to mind...

I hope there's more of this! Keep it up;)