All Comments on 'Her Plant'

by Mittia

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miaxoxoxomiaxoxoxo10 months ago

I was enjoying it until you mentioned the damn plant slamming into her cervix. That is not pleasurable, that's painful!!!

MittiaMittia10 months agoAuthor

in response to miaxoxoxo, you're supposed to infer from the lines about 'her muscles 'down there' weakening' that she wouldn't entirely feel the pain, but yeah i understand the confusion and i can't figure out if it's possible to edit it to make it more obvious :( plus this is fantasy/sci-fi, it doesn't have to abide by normal biological standards

writing your thoughts while horny makes you miss things i guess D:

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I liked it, the plants mechanism for “ensnaring” its carriers was more realistic I figured, as far as if it could happen I mean. The flower just waits there after clearing the surrounding brush alone so it’s noticeable and the pollen and visuals make people approach it.

IceBreaker42IceBreaker4210 months ago

I think how the flower attracts hosts is pretty realistic, it sits by itself and waits to get noticed then someone appears eventually

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

You should include more of the roots!

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