All Comments on 'Her Professor Ch. 02'

In the first chapter, Will comes across as a sympathetic character. Then he attacks a student in the second chapter? You're a good writer. I want the story to go in a direction where Will remains a good guy.

This wa sjust weird. William trying to assault her came completely out of nowhere and the tone completely shifted between the first chapter and this one.

Thank you for your feedback. You are both absolutely right. I've submitted an edit that softens Will's approach. I hope you like the updated version.