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KerrionKerrion5 months ago

Looks like an intriguing story, but came across like a movie trailer showing some of the highlights but no real substance or background filling information. Definitely would have been better if you'd fleshed it out.

shadrachtshadracht5 months ago

Yeah - I agree with Kerrion. This has a great outline of a story, but a lot of the parts are lacking in details. The sex isn't involved enough to be erotic, it's mainly just a summary of "we did this". The urban fantasy parts are interesting, but rushed. All in all, it was an interesting story, but one that needed far more than this length to truly tell. 4*

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Been writing for a while, will be posting more, all that were mostly written for my wife. As much as I love feedback, be polite! As one of my readers pointed out, this is an amateur site, I'm no professional and write to arouse, not to make a living. Some of my stories have ...