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by LisaLinda

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BarlowNBarlowNabout 2 months ago

I like the idea. There are some grammatical errors that could be cleaned up with an editor. Also try including dialogue as a way to describe the action so it doesn’t read like a how to manual.

pdiddyd55pdiddyd55about 2 months ago

Excellent story. Jack got what he deserved, and wanted.

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Married for a longtime. Have done some swinging and swapping. prefer to be one on one with a lover. Lesbian more than Bi-sexual. like silk stockings, giving and receiving oral. love to be seduced slowly and undressed by lover. enjoy long candlelight baths with female lover.