All Comments on 'Holiday Business Ch. 01'

You lost me when you took covid/corona serious.

Cleaning up some typos and punctuation errors would make it easier to read. That doesn't negatively affect my scoring, just a suggestion. The story was still readable and enjoyable.

In response to the previous commenter: The pandemic has quite rightly had significant effects on our lives. It's as real as death.

Loved the story, hope to read more. 5*

Thank you BuzzCzar Sir, its difficult for me to write in full flow and sort punctuation. I do read it a few times and put it through spell check.

I know do not now have a proof reader, sorry again. x

markies we have lost 19 poor souls from our community with Covid so we take it very serious.

Great story, absolutely loved it