All Comments on 'Holiday in Utopia'

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A suggestion for your future stories, maybe make a note at the beginning that the story is about wife swapping so people who don't want to read that genre can avoid the story.

5 stars. Normally I do not read such long stories 7 pages but you hooked me from the start and kept my attention though out the story line.

Thought Wes had plans for Katie and was up to no good. Making her his slave or something.

Ending was great and hope you add on to this story of Marissa pregnant with Steve's baby. Maybe them getting together for a reunion before she has the baby. Katie pregnant as well???!! Thank you for writing this great story. More please.

Enjoyable and well told. 5

A short where Steve randomly meets Marissa and the baby would be great. I wouldn't even want anything sexual to happen in the story, just a realization from him about what happened and why.

Thanks lovemesomephilly and others suggesting a follow-up. I don't tend to write sequels, and as you say I'm not sure that it would be the type of story Literotica would host. But never say never :-)