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Also, it only took me 98 chapters to write my first human/human scene with no paranormal entities involved. Hope I did okay, and I hope you enjoyed this chapter, because I enjoyed writing it for you. Stay tuned for next time, because we're gonna land in sunny Hawaii!!!
Give yourself a hug, you've earned it.
~Annabelle Hawthorne
- COMMENTS
Chromy24834 months agoI love it when you tell more background around any of the characters. I'm glad to know more about Ratu's background, thank you.
Lenny209 months agoI loved how Ratu, for the first time, opened up about her past. She will certainly be really interesting to watch this book.
I'm not sure why, but everytime Grace is even mentioned I get the chills - in a good way. I loved Velvet's, Darren's and Ana's story, so their combined offspring being part of the Radley family just tickles something deep inside for me.
Don't know how I feel about Cyrus yet, my assumption is that he really wants to side with Mike (for now), but him breaking in will reveal either Grace of Eulalie and he will then become hell-bent on killing them, forcing Mike to take him out. Would fit his arch started way back-when I think.
I know this was more of a filler, but last chapter was phenomenal and next gets us to Hawaii - so I can't give less than 5 stars.
