All Comments on 'Home, with you Pt. 01'

First story!

5

Whew! 🥵 I really enjoyed this piece. As someone who has long fantasized about being taken this way in the shower, I give you two thumbs up. You have an amazing way of narrating and are wonderfully descriptive. By the end of this I was thoroughly...ahem.. 'satisfied'. You've actually inspired me to get back in to my writing! I look forward to future submissions 😘

Really fun read but it was all about a loving sex scene. I like more "romance" depth in this genre - just my preference. Well written. 4.4*