All Comments on 'Homebound Ch. 08'

by GrandmasterBlast

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muskyboymuskyboyabout 1 year ago

You can't put it off any longer.....

Darkshooter213Darkshooter21312 months ago

WOW! The buildup of the story was intense. They say that a good story will have you emotionally invested in the characters and the story, but what you did here had me on edge of my bed screaming at my tablet ( TELL EACH OTHER HOW YOU TRULY FEEL!) I was literally sweating that they would fuck up and miss each other from there own insecurities. GREAT WORK! I hope in the near future, that I will be able to read a whole novel of yours. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

We need the next part!!

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