All Comments on 'Homebound Ch. 09'

Fantastic job!!! But just some constructive criticism, I think that it would be nice if we had some more from Kelly’s perspective it was kinda lacking in this chapter also you should put the spread sheet in the chapter 10 for all to see.

Just to clarify I meant during the sex scenes

ahh darn that means i have to throw out the 5 pages of cooking pov i wrote :P, I now see that i mainly focused on what Max was feeling that entire chapter and none on what kelly was so in chp 11 i threw more kelly stuff in.

I see that you used to post a new chapter every 10 days or so. And on twitter you finished chapter 10 a day after this chapter.

awaiting when the new one will be out XD

When is 10 coming out?

Love the story! I’d love a section where Kelly gets so big she stays inflated for a whole day… or more

Dear diary: it’s been 30 days since homebound chapter 9 was published and chapter 10 is nowhere to be found. Sadness. Pineapples are now exploding.