All Comments on 'Homebound Ch. 11'

loved it and loved the story

thanks for your contribution

Love like the rest of the series but what happened with Aunt Stacy? It just kinda cuts from the grand finale to them being pregnant. Was kinda hoping that Stacy and Christine would get more involved.

In response to NekoNomad: The story was drawing to its conclusion and another scene with aunt stacy or christine would have dragged out the story, now that doesn't exclude the possibility i make an extra scene chapter where... i don't know Kelly and Gwen go off to a maternity spa or something and Stacy seduces max, i left it open ended, especially since both stacy and christine where just plot devices i made to move the story forward.

Amazing. Really enjoyed this story, you’re an incredible writer. Love the kinks you explored, would be very interested to see an 18 years later chapter with the harem grown up

get Grammarly, you will love it

There were so many points in the story that I loved that I can't even begin to spell out. But the fact that they were 18 year old kids with all their insecurities and self doubts carried the tension of the two main characters. I for one would still enjoy if you pick up the story and flesh out some of the secondary characters would be interesting. But all in all, this was a fun read. I for one am looking forward to reading more of your erotic stories. Thank you for the fantastic adventure.

Absolutely loved it, hope you write more stories in the future!