by Verys
Like it, but not now as much as the first chapter. Initially tense, erotic and unsettling, now a bit too melodramatic, even predictable and missing sensuality. As a near hopeless romantic, not sure what I was/am looking for in your character-driven storyline, but Cassidy - Hanna relationship remains most intriguing. Still on board. Regardless of how you close out this piece looking forward to more from your imagination. Thanks for sharing.