All Comments on 'Hostess Pt. 01'

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DrPopeDrPope7 months ago

When she gets home (alone) why is she taking off YOUR coat ? …. This is just one example the story is littered with mistakes like this…. This story is barely legible because of your failure to understand perspective…

Campus77Campus777 months ago

Good plot line. Needs a little editing to clean up the context. Interesting where this will go.

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I enjoy reading and writing erotic stories. I have lots of ideas and story lines, but sometimes have trouble with middles and endings. so please forgive me or send ideas.

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