All Comments on 'Hotel Bar'

Wasn't really much of a story. Ending was short with no punch. If the ending was, after taking the picture she turned and said to him. "Pull up your pants while I send this off to your wife". "This will be a great visual to add to the divorce papers she has drawn up and ready to serve you when you get home".

JustOneMansOpinion of how to put a punch at the end of a story.

Thought maybe she’d attach the photo to a message to her hubby saying he wasn’t the only one who was cheating.

Adding two sentences to the start of your story to make sure we know they are married does not make something a Loving Wives story. Had you skipped that paragraph, it would have had zero impact on the rest of the story. The only thing it would have changed is making a couple of tags incorrect. It was already in the wrong category, as this was clearly just another Erotic Encounter.

Random hook ups can be so much fun

There used to be something once called the "zipless fuck", being an occurrence like the one described here, like strangers on a train, or a plane, or an empty bathroom in a deserted part of a hotel !

The last time I can remember ever hearing the term used had to be at LEAST 20 years ago...

...you seem to have brought the concept back.

Nicely done.

Story about extremely unlikeable people.

What is this story supposed to tell us? That there are characterless people who don't give a damn about their marriages and families, as long as they have sexual satisfaction? Yes, there are heaps of such scum. But are their experiences really good for stories? I doubt it!

Some proof reading would clarify this story. They both seemed to be horny but is a blow job enough for them?