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All Comments on 'Hotel Ice Machine Fun'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

you have to really have a lack of common sense to write anything from this broken POV. Awful.

kiwi857kiwi85711 months ago

This was so odd and awful

ErotiqueWriterErotiqueWriter11 months agoAuthor

I appreciate the comment and you taking the time to read too. The thing with this particular story is that I followed all the instructions that the woman I wrote this for wanted.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. POV was a little difficult to understand but again everyone can use a bit of their own imagination to get the POV right.

This was very hot.

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I'm a male in my 40's who doesn't love to speak in the third person in most bios. I had a Tumblr blog for over 10 years and I've decided to venture on here. Every one of these stories is about a woman in my life. Some of these are narrations of actual things that happened. Ot...