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Bronco56Bronco56over 1 year ago

I thought it was great. Nice short story of loving. 5stars

dmallorddmallordover 1 year ago

You did it right for just 750 words. But the twist was a bit more than I expected.

Dutchboy51Dutchboy51about 1 year ago

Congratulations on an excellent entry. You did a much better job than I did in my entry on parceling out precious "word space" to the beginning, middle and ending of the story. 750 words is a tough task master. Bravo.

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March 2024 Update: Just submitted my 25th story here on lit, "Festival of Fools" for the 2024 April Fools Contest. I'm incredibly thrilled with the reception all of my stories have gotten over the past few years. What started as a "let me try this once" has turned into a bit ...