by HottieDiane
This reads like sitting in grandma's oarlor, sipping tea and waiting for the gang bang to start.
Yeah, no sex so you leave yourself open to criticism. Don't be discouraged, just give us some nasty stuff soon.
Love the way this story is slowly evolving, building anticipation. The stage is set for some smoldering, erotic narrative as more of Diane's desires and experiences are revealed and shared.