All Comments on 'House of Lust Ch. 02: Observations'

to pay your husbands debts, have some self-respect, and divorce him, you are totally incompatible. Now you are worse than he was.

Next chapter should begin with ...now that the divorce is over and my reputation was shot, I embraced my inner whore...

So you collect reasons that allow the whore to cheat on her husband! A 5 "cock, unable to satisfy her and always tired! What nonsense. If real couples would treat each other like this, it would be time for a clarifying conversation and not for prostitution! You are just writing a cheap cuckold story nothing more ! A pity!

She's a whore. Multiple STD's will follow. Then the divorce. Stupidity runs amok.

1 star

Fucking the washing machine is the most intelligent part of this story.

The theme has been used before and some good some bad. As I read this you are setting up the husband as the reason for her failures and she will justify her slut behavior based on his failures in her eyes. I amy read the next one but probably will just skim and score low.

So read with interest. Enjoyed it. Looking forward to part 3 x

Nice... Your story is refreshing and I have to admit, I like reading about women becoming prostitutes.

Mikey,

I've enjoyed both chapters so far.

I'll probably get some push back for this, but it's always beyond me when people make the claim that they totally read a story, then trash it left and right. If they're not enjoying it, I don't know why they waste their time reading it, then take additional time to trash it. Makes me not trust their comments.

Looking forward to the next chapter(s).

Steve

There's some really hot stuff here, and I wish you'd continue! But there are also a lot of typos that keep taking me out of the story (like missing apostrophes in possessives, like "her new friends sex toy" towards the end) --- a little proof-reading would make this a lot better. But please do come back to the story!