All Comments on 'How I Became Alison Ch. 05'

Writing style was fine, but the level of attn to detail in the violence left the feel that the author was more focused on that than on the sex. Leaves this reader feeling like it is more violence porn than sex porn. Perhaps recategorize to non-consent.

I enjoyed this story because he got to suck a big juicy cock. That's what I love to do. Getting beat up isn't nice but I suppose it's part of the background story.

Anyway, I look forward to reading the next chapters. I think I know where it's going and it will be great when the 2 of them get the upper hand on the real Alison.

Keep up the great writing and please let me know when ch. 6 is ready.

Hugs & kisses,

cdCindy1