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nutcase666nutcase666over 3 years ago

Love this story soo much please keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This is still one of my continual favorites. I love the cast of characters you created. They are such an incredibly eclectic bunch and you are constantly adding more along the way. I really enjoyed where Jay verbally lost it on his “parents” at the restaurant and Sheri jumped in and put the fear of her family in them but in this chapter you brought up how Jay has been allowing the possible business associates of his “parents” to hear about what pieces of human trash they are. I am certain it will have to come to a head at some point just like it will with that “doorman” that screws with him at club Eden and I cannot wait. It is so nice to be able to get so interested in a story and have a sort of hero and/or underdog to pull for.

Thank you again for this awesome literary gift. It means quite a bit to me.

J.D.

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