All Comments on 'How It Started, How It's Going Pt. 02'

Will they have JT over again?

This will end with her leaving Bill and she should.

He literally watched her have sex and did nothing. They hadn’t talked about it, she acquiesced to another man and Bill just sat there like a retard.

Rinse repeat….

It took long enough to get to the erotic part and then it was over. I'm taking off a star for lack of editing. Omitted plurals and possessives and grammar mistakes a fourth grader wouldn't make. 4 stars. If it takes 4 pages in the next chapter I'll move on long before the end.

I love the story. My only critique is referring to meters in America football. Yards all the way. And the only football on Friday night is high school football, and usually not on TV. Five stars regardless.

Awesome story!