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PugzillaPugzillaover 1 year ago

The dark edge in this series was really good, especially this entry. Suggestions for the next installment Twins, local celebrities, married woman, preacher's wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent!

eazyguneazygunover 1 year ago

I literally googled "How to seduce a Huge Pair of Boobs" to find the video haha

Couldn't help it ;)

Nice work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You desperately need a native English speaking proofreader

Zaos1Zaos1over 1 year agoAuthor

@Pugzilla, Thanks, i am glad you liked the last chapter!!, is really hard to find inspiration and time to wirte a story, i have some other ideas in mind, let´s see when i find the time to craft them and share them here :-D

Zaos1Zaos1over 1 year agoAuthor

@eazygun, Thanks!, i am glad you liked the story! :-D

Zaos1Zaos1over 1 year agoAuthor

@Anonymous, Thanks! :-D

daddymacdaddymacabout 2 months ago

This final chapter could have been better.. it felt rushed.

Zaos1Zaos1about 2 months agoAuthor

Hello @daddymac, thanks for your feedback... do you have something in mind, something that could be a better ending... may be i could write an alternate ending if i find another great idea :-D.

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