All Comments on 'Hunted'

You are the master. Glad I read that

Crazy good! I'm so confused by what this story makes me feel, all at once I am sickened by the violence, disgusted from the abuse, and hot from the sex! You have talent, being able to pull off so much violence and still inspire appreciation from the audience, you've made a masterpiece and I admire your ability to create such a controversial love story!

That was the BEST piece of literature I have ever read. You are amazing. You have no idea how much I want Sasha right now. Honestly that was wow. It was a real story, not rushed, in movement and had details. You are amazing. Keep writing.

<3 the story. Beautiful and sadistic. But totally hot!

I think the last fight was too much. Sasha should have softened after he found her in America. They could have argued, and he could have threatened. However, he shouldn't have been able to bring himself to violence if he loved her. He did not redeem himself, and no woman like her would stay with a man who had just beaten her so brutally.

Even the female readers who say they like Sasha would never accept him in real life.

Lastly, he was a murderer and torturer of innocents. Nobody would live happily ever after with this man.

I read the entire story because I was hoping for something redeeming and vulnerable within Sasha. How sad that nothing redeeming existed.

I'm so happy the way it ended just like it started with him having complete control over her ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, very , very very, good an the way ye left it , you could go on an finish it bye letting us know what happen next :) ,,,,,,,,,,,,, or just let us use our own imagined,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, anyway I luv it ,,, thank-you so much ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, an I think if anyone doesn't like this an try to tell ye that it is to harsh ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, please remind them that ye aren't forcing them to read it to the end just quit reading ,,,,,,,,,,,,,

That's a great song to listen to while reading this. I love this story. I want this, but without being beat up. So hot. Great job. =)

Although it got a bit long, it was a great story.. specially the way it ended!! It's the first tym i've seen sm1 say "I love u" in a sex story! The usual stuff is pretty bad but this story was great.. specially after her torture ended. I felt glad she could escape from her original prison...It also felt nice to take into account their feelings for each other.. usually these stories start and end with sex with little else in between.

Yes, I did like the story and the way it ended.

Finally, I've found the perfect fic!! All of the other noncon stories are too tame for me, but this one, wow. This one takes the cake. The sex is perfectly detailed, there's hardly any grammar errors, and the characters are relatable and well developed!! 10/10, have read many times. <3

I love this story, this is by far my favorite erotica. I read it pretty regularly and always enjoy it. I hope you write and post more some day. Like another commentor said, this is just the ind of relationship I would want without all the beating up. Maybe someday, until then I've got this story!!

Omgoodness this is by far the best best best story iv ever read online!! Iv never before wrote comments while iv read online (which i have read to many to count on many different reading,sites) this book was worth of a million comments ;-) HOT & SEXY!! Wishing there was more to read lol

*pants, drools, twitches in anticipation!*

THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING! THIS WAS MY FANTASY ON PAPER!

I have been searching for a story like this for YEARS! Now that I've read it, I want to LIVE it!

You're an amazing writer who should definately consider going pro!

I honestly love you for this! :P

I've read this story so many times over the years. I can never remember the damn name of it though, so I find myself desperately searching for it... This time I'm throwing in the towel and simply adding it to my bookmarks.

Fantastic story, correct grammar, super fucking hot. There's not much more you can ask for in a story. I know it's been years, but I really do wish you'd write some more. I read a lot of shitty stories on this site. You have a rare talent.

I couldn't read this fast enough. This is such a marvelous Romance. Most unusual. I'm an editor, but was so into the story that I never noticed if there were any editing issues. They are like two cats fighting each other. They need each other and won't admit it.

I can only hope to find someone who will treat me something similar to this. So far, the closest I've come is in Second Life Virtual World.

This is a beautiful story and done beautifully. Thanks.

I honestly couldnt read this fast enough! It is amazing! you have a rare talent for describing things with such passion and such amazing imagery. i want to have lived this myself. also, naming him Aleksandar/Sasha was awesome, cuz those are like, the hottest names ever. dont ever stop writing, i was so into this story, it is by far the best ive ever read ever. i know ill be coming back to it to read again, over and over. <3

Thank you for sharing this! I have never seen, read, or heard ANYTHING that hit on my deepest desires so squarely. The scenario was breathtaking, the characters were somehow well-developed despite the short length of the story, and the writing was clear and efficient - yet beautifully detailed. Wow, just...wow! Thanks again!

Loved it... Great detail... Perfect storyline... NEEDS A SEQUEL!!

Just goes to show - even if it hurts, it can still be love... Thank you for the great read !

I was sad when I got to page 6! I loved it! Didn't want it to end. Loved every aspect of it!

Patriotism, love... wow!

I want more!

Awesome story, just awesome! I love the build up and the passion between them!

I can't really say I'm too happy about the addition of the landmines... all in all still a very good story...

That was one hot story. You're a gifted writer. Bravo!

This was my first story on Lit that turned me on to reluctance. I love this story and enjoy reading it on and off again. Now I found it again now its in my favorites!

Loved it was fun, good characters hope you make a sequel and other stories.

This story was amazing...... got me really hot..... please do a sequel you are a gifted writer who really knows how to capture and hold peoples attention, and i REALLY want to know where sasha and suzanne will go from here. x

This was the BEST FUCKING story I ve ever read. I love how u described the whippings. Perfect amount of romance too! I hope you write some more....where u fuck the girl's pussy, make it bleed soo much she cries and bites his dick so hard that he whipps her in EVRY DAMN SHITTY PLACE reallllly realllly hard, give her some super raw boobs that have been serously tortured, electrocuted nipples over and over and over again till she begs to be fucked by her rapers, have a man literally EAT and BITE her pussy and nipples...HARD.... so hard she cries in pain...... FUCK HER BRAINS!!!!.Hands behind her back ...lip biting, fucking the bitch and raping her till she is unconscious...

good story

Amazing!! Lost count how many times I have read this now!! Please write a sequel, I'm actually begging you!

Very well written! Much better than 50 shades of Grey lol

Enough said In the title.

just toooooo long

I was hooked with you story right away!!! I am new to this sort of thing but am quickly finding that I love it!!! Please write more and I will keep reading!!! Well done!!!

Loved it! great plot, story line, reluctance and "happy" ending! ;-D

Such a great story! So hot! Im a female and I'm totally into the fantasy of forced sex but it's hard to find stories out there that portray it in a decent manner but still have the essence of "rape". It's a fine line to walk. I think you've done it wonderfully!

This was perfect, start to finish. Loved it.

I have read this story so many times now. I have even forwarded this to my boyfriend in the hopes that he will feel inspired! As a masochist, I connect in many ways with the story. Whilst no one enjoys being punched in the face, the realism added to the eroticism.

There are a few commenters who have suggested that you're sick. I feel very strongly about each to their own. There are many people in the world who voluntarily engage in sexual activity similar to that which is portrayed in the story.

In short, the writing style is my ideal, the characterisation is well thought through, and I love that Sasha remains true to himself until the end. I think that a non-violent ending would have shattered the dynamic. After all, violence and passion are not that different.

Thanks again!

You're a good writer but it's a horrible story, even as a fantasy. I know a lot of people like it but I think they represent a minority of the human race. How can someone hurt someone they say they love?

Beating a woman is about as low as a human being can stoop, in fact, someone who beats a woman doesn't deserve to be called human.

Personally, I don't think this story should even be allowed to be on here. Or any story that is similar.

Violence against another person should never be "celebrated" or admired unless it's done for the protection of another life and that is definitely not the case here.

To the previous poster: I don't know where to start and am restraining myself from writing a 20 page thesis on the previous comment; but I respectfully and completely disagree with your statement. Even in a category named ‘nonconsent/reluctance’ and even with a disclaimer, you still read a story and find fault with the author when you don’t like it instead of possibly looking inward or at least saying, “this wasn’t for me”. It’s sadly hypocritical and humorous that your morality allows you to venture onto an erotica website and into a category such as nonconsent and yet you judge those who might have limits beyond your own. It’s like you took your sense of ‘right and wrong’ to the very limit, drew a line, and said “everything over this line is wrong”. I think the point of a site like this with very specific categories is to tailor to those minorities who do find this sort of topic arousing. I am one of them. I actually just spent the last hour and a half searching for this story because I remembered reading it 8 years ago, back when I was 25 and still very sexually ‘naive’. Well tonight I was discussing the premise of this scenario with my Dom and wanted to find it for him to read.

You say ‘how can someone hurt someone they say they love?’ I am not a weak-willed woman or lacking in self-esteem, but I am very naturally submissive and have great love and respect for my Dom. It is a very physical relationship, and that physical control brings about a level of mental arousal that I cannot even begin to explain. If you would like to truly understand how this power exchange could be possible and even rewarding, then you can read about it to your heart’s content online. I have no deep-seated psychological issue and had a wonderful childhood with no trauma, but I love being controlled, humiliated, and even ‘abused’ in the bedroom. It brings a level of release and complete trust for another and is more respectful and honest than I’ve ever found in any ‘normal’ relationship. And my Dom isn’t a heartless, inhumane criminal. He’s intelligent, giving, caring, and very concerned for my safety and well-being. But he’s also willing to take me to those limits I create for myself, and I love him for this. In turn, I offer a level of trust and loyalty he cannot elsewhere obtain and the balance and exchange is almost spiritual. I could seriously give you a very lengthy and very detailed psychological interpretation as to the ‘why’, but can best sum it up: “to each his own”. I noted on your profile that you had quite a few incest stories on your favorites list; how is that any less reprehensible than someone being sadist or masochistic?

Finally, your statement about prohibiting stories like this one and those similar to be posted on here opens up a completely different topic of freedom of speech and censorship. How can 2 consenting adults engaging in a very physically rough relationship be ‘worse’ than a STORY (i.e., fiction) about a father and daughter or mother and son? It’s just an outlet, Sir. You’re on here reading for the same reason as thousands of others, and I think it’s beautiful we can all share in our ‘deviance’ and know we’re not wrong or condemned or flawed human beings for following our imaginations into the darker corners of possibility.

I hope you understand this wasn’t meant as an ‘attack’ on you but a simple objection and a differing opinion. If you’d be interested in discussing our opinions in a healthy debating manner, then I’d love to hear from you. Regardless, I hope you continue to stumble across stories that stretch your mind and limits, even at your age. ;)

I absolutely loved this story, great job! I still think with the amount of times he came inside of her she should have been pregnant, Sasha would've been shocked, you should do that as an alternate ending!!

Awwww, this was so cute. I loved it very much. Especially the ending when he admitted he loved her. Oh my god, I loved it. He fell in love with his captive...its so sweet.

You should do more stories like this :) they're absolutely perfect in every sense. Suzanna is defiant and not weak pathetic girl. I like that. And Sasha is just HOT!!!! And the ending. WOW! They got each other and he said "I love you". How cute!

This is a wonderful fantasy. A love and hate relationship. Although I don't condone abuse towards woman this story had a legit reason for it. I read it again and again because ur writing pulled me in so effortlessly. I hope u use your talent and write a romantic novel. I'd love to read it. Thank you.

There are few few stories that have truly capture me and this is one of them. I LOVE this!

WoW!!! (Misspelling intentional.)

These few six pages are absolutely brilliantly constructed. I've read thousands of novels, text books, and poems; ditto watching movies, stage plays and television shows. I've listened to music of every ilk.

Despite these factoids. NO single author has provided such a compelling set of characters in an absolutely absurd relationship that is equally plausible. I can only describe this author as a smattering of Shakespeare, with a heavy note of Tom Robbins, a smidgen of Eric Lustbader, a bit of Ben Franklin's wit, and the list goes on.

What makes this story so unbelievably fantastic is not the sex, which is hot; nor the violence, which is vile; nor the strange quilt pattern of pure emotional opposites, but the dilemma it poses about the relationship between men and women, or more aptly: people.

If he approached a movie producer, he'd be hurdled over a thousand sets from every classic movie ever made; no publisher or writer's agent would touch this author with a ten-foot pole; and it would certainly be horribly offensive in some way to virtually every reader, while at the same time being absolutely captivating.

I would be honored by a personal email from you, and will write, under separate cover, my email address and phone number.

Utterly mesmerized,

Glenn

Thanks for sharing.

Still gets me nice and wet reading this

Great fraud. This isn't erotica. I delved in hoping to read some rubbishy smut about bdsm but came out reading super romantic/sexy/erotic suspense, suspense being the operational word here.

this should be published

I have read this story over and over through the years (yes, years). There is nothing, published hard copy or written online that does it for me like this story does. It's like you tapped into our minds and pulled our fantasies out and put it back together here in this wonderfully erotic story. Hats off to you my friend. Good job.

This erotica is one of the most stimulating stories I've ever read!

I thought it was great. Wish it was longer or turned into a series though.

I loved this so much! So hot, nothing bad to say about it. Read this multiple times. Wish it turned into a longer series! Anyways, thanks for sharing! :)

Awesome story, really hot, absolutely loved it.

Absolutely wonderful

make this audio plzzzzz

I wish I could be Sasha's prisoner

I can't stop reading this. PLEASE make this an audible. I really liked how sasha was really a dominant strong person with feelings. From the beginning he knew what he wanted and gotten it. Too bad it can't be a series.

Loved the characters & development, wanted to keep reading!

This was actually the first story I fell in love with when I first got on Literotica many years ago! Still love it :)

I was apprehensive at first when I read your description. Good stories are rare nowadays on this site. But am I glad I went ahead and read it. The writing was superb, the story, the characters, and the sex! Really amazing job. One of the best.

I was glad to know about the background details but you cut out much more. I think you should keep the original as well as this alternative version. This was a good read but the other one was a gold mine. 😊

Best story I've ever read on this site. Usually this level of brutality would turn my stomach, but you are an exceptional writer, the heroine is strong, and Sasha is wicked hot. It's rare that I read something on here without critiquing the writing as I read, but your execution was so flawless I was totally pulled into the story.

lol I have to agree with the last commenter. usually this would have gotten me up in arms...the brutality of a man toward a woman and then she falls for him! arg...even saying it aggrivates me but somehow, for this couple it works lol. Maybe it is how hot they are together, or maybe it is the way he began to break sooner than her by his actions...i think they can work. I enjoyed it overall. I'd like to know who she worked for though. It would be tough for her to hide this and just disappear with him, unless he has lots of money somewhere. I'm impressed he got into the country somehow.

I don't know if the other stories listed in the series are about them or not. Either way, satisfying story and well fleshed out characters which you mentioned you'd worked on. I'll check out your other stories.

Oh my Gosh, thank you. This was easily one of my all time favorites on this site. This animalistic brutality is spot on!

Hard to read and finish but exceptional.

This is the first story I've read from this author and I am not disappointed!! Absolutely wonderful! The animalistic personalities from both characters ensures the story is filled with LUST!! And man, that Sasha is fucking hot!!

You are an exceptional writer, I had no idea what was in store when I read the first page. But wow, you have truly impressed me! I thought it would be your average slave girl who gets fucked and is submissive the whole time, but man. You are amazing. The characters the story the plot, the everything is absolutely outstanding!

This story made me cry but I had enjoyed their emotional moments. I am a sucker for stories like this where they both fight but meanwhile, they develop feelings for each other

Bravo! {standing ovation}

This was worthy of favoriting! 1724 have as of this post!

I extremely loved the story and the characters in it as well. I really want to learn more about them, if possible. Everything in this is just... amazing.

The story built up well and the characters were behaved realistically. The story was the right length to get the story told without droning on and on like many do here. The scenes were well-thought out and the sex scenes were very exciting. My favorite story so far. Please continue writing.

This is my dream...I dream to be that girl and fall for a man like Sasha....

This was the best story I have read on here. Maybe a sequel to this story?

please continue this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was simply amazing

i couldn't stop reading; It was truly addicting.

I want to know what happens with these 2 wonderful strong characters.

This was amazing! There needs to be a sequel

Thank you for writing. This was sn amazing story. Keep up the good work.

Absolutely stunning story. I was aroused, scared, horny, concerned, crying and happy throughout the whole story and loved every word of it. ♥

Huge compliment, dear author ^^

This story was amazin g! Bravo to the author, truthfully so much work was puy into it I feel like I should have paid for it.

loved it but the rating stopped at 2 starts when i wanted to give it 5

Although I have to say I was very disappointed not to find any anal included, I thought for sure the specific mentioning of "Bosnian" in the title meant lots of it. They tend to be all about anal...

I don't typically care for this type of story. Where I would have dropped another story and moved on to the next, this story kept me reading and attached to both characters. I also enjoyed a full length story without having to wait for chaperts to show up.

This was so enticing. GREAT. Kept me on the edge all through

Chick sure can take a beating! And give as much as she takes! Puts me in the mind of Black Widow's interrogation scene. One of the best pieces I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Thank you for sharing!

It is a great story. I really enjoyed reading it. Sasha, wow.

Thank you!

What a great story. A nice change from the usual story lines. Fantastic and Thank You.

While I enjoyed the story as a piece of fictional fantasy I take issue with anyone defending it as an example of BDSM. Any time an act of domination (whether it be with violence, sex or anything else) is not COMPLETELY consensual from the get go it is ABUSE! While we all can safely enjoy fantasy without guilt I get really queasy with those who don't seem to be able to be able to recognize it for what it is. Whether you love it or hate it folks it's just a story. In real life a large strong man would probably break most the bones in a woman's face were he to full out punch her in it and no way would any woman want to or be able to blow a guy with a broken jaw. It is posted under non-consent and starts with a very clear warning of violence so it's a little silly for anyone complaining about reading exactly that. On the other hand those who try defending it as an example of BDSM are very confused. These characters did not negotiate terms and limits so if you are in a similar relationship..... get out!,

Thank you for the story enjoyed it so much

This reminds me of japanese hentai where the guy rapes the girl and she loves him afterward. I dont mind though as it as detailed. But one thing I have to ask, Where was the nonhuman aspect?

After being on this site for a couple of years now I really appreciate this story! It was very good and had my emotions on a roller coaster ride! Nice breath of fresh air! Please don't stop writing!! Thank you

I don't normanally comment on these stories, but must say that I really enjoyed this one. Thanks!

I loved it, I have read a lot of story's like this but I must say this one hit me home. It was an emotional story as well as a sexy hot tense story, and I enjoyed every moment of it. Your a great writer and I would love to read more of your story's, I can't wait thanks for sharing.

I've come back to this story several times now and it's unsettling to note it's affect on me...breathlessly pouring over the pages and wrapped up in your story. Thank you for the welcome change of pace and flushed cheeks.

S.

Every story in the non-consent area has the same idea. A girl finds that right from the beginning she is sexually attracted to and turned on by the man who is assaulting her. It doesn't work that way! Give it time. Let him conquer her and don't have her turned on by him the first time he touches her breast. Oh well, I guess that will never happen because these stories are all written by men for men and men actually believe that a girl who is being sexually assaulted is only fake struggling and deep down she really likes be raped and is in love with her rapist from the first encounter they have.

I loved the story for me this was different from what I normally read. But I have to say I really liked it.

I really enjoyed this story.

I like the aspect of rape fantasies but because it is a short story, it felt like there wasn't enough momentum for the characters to actually "fall in love." Perhaps if you had focused a bit more on building the story of their emotions instead of the continous flow of rape/beating scenes. And as one commenter stated, Sasha really didn't redeem himself at all especially with the whole violently punching her in the end scene. I could've forgiven him. All in all, the story was engaging and I was aroused but at the same harshly turned off by his violent nature.

That was different, I really enjoyed it. Thank You. I noted a couple of minor discrepancies but it is a fantasy after all.

This is without doubt one of the best stories published on this site!

And LITEROTICANS everywhere agree. HUNTED has now become only the 12th story in the history of LITEROTICA (out of some 350,000+ published here) that has received 500 comments from our readers.

This author, furrybert, deserves congratulations for this wonderful work she has shared with us - THANK YOU!

I feel like the girl at the party... the one everyone is hiding something from. So, okay, c'mon - let me in on the joke. Tell me what I've missed 'cause what I read can't be the story that has been lauded. What I read was middling in quality, like thousands of others on this site, features characters so thinly depicted as to be ghosts, and offers us the unbelievable. Really!? A female military pilot gets captured and is turned on like a light switch by the brutality of her captor? And the psycho that makes girls scream for fun... that's who is turned into the the sappy, love sick character in the final paragraphs? How much to you have to ask of readers to believe this?

I don't blame the author unless it was they that pumped the story up and left 489 comments.