by furrybert
The only question is from what organization? CIA, Military Intell, SEALS, Rangers, or even the OSI of the USAF. Something requires you have such a background from your comments - unless you read considerable tons of action stories. Whatever, you have a wide range of such Intell to have given us a perfect five star story. Your way of expressing the acts of sex without the actual words was perfect. The end seemed out of scope with such activity between the two main characters. Keep up with such protracted 'spook' style writings.
I hope I'm not alone in wanting a sequel of this storyline. Dying to know where Sasha and Suzanne leave off from this point. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS.
It sounds like an event that could have taken part in the Balkens war.
I absolutely loved it! The angry and bold character of Sasha was hard to resist! I want one! Thank you furrybert for this amazing story and your picturesque writing style was hard to ignore! ;)
This is a fanstatic story. Sexy, thrilling, fearful but loving too! Please continue!
This was riveting and fabulous and horrifying, everything a good novel needs. Please let us know what happens to these two characters! I just couldn't stop reading it, which is the mark of a great writer.
Would anybody be interested in reading a gay incest story in Bosnian/Serbian language?
Doesn't influence my opinion that this is one of the best stories on Literotica.
It is pretty long, and to be honest, I didn't exactly read everything. There were some things stopping me - the fact that the story is pretty long, contains rape scenes, portrays my people, and I have lots of obligations these days - but I can tell for sure that this is my thing. Descriptions are wonderful, and erotic scenes are superb.
Yes, I admit I sometimes have a rape fantasy, and let's be real - which young Serbian woman could be indifferent to this story?
Želim da mi muškarac poput Saše oduzme nevinost.
(I wish a man like Sasha to take away my virginity.)
I know his real name was not sasha, but all over the story he is called sasha ( pet name though )...........Don't you think it doesn't suits his personality??
So she's a traitor to her country. So much for being strong, lol she fell for the enemy! Dumb bimbo cunt.
From the story it is clear that she was sent behind enemy lines and told to hold out for a specific length of time and then to give the enemy false info that they acted on and walked into a trap. She drugged Sasha to prevent him from waking up and getting killed in the trap
I read this years and years ago, and I had it on my mind but couldn't remember the name of it. I spent the past day and a half looking through the non-consent stories trying to find this gem.
I'm so glad I found it again and got to read it once more. I'm also happy to see there are more in the series now. Thank you so much for giving us such a great story!
It is my third tone reading this story and I'll read it again. It never fails to give me orgasms. I love it. Please keep up the great work and keep adding more stories!!!
Thanks so much for this story. Definitely my absolute favorite on this site. I just keep coming back to it.
And this is still one of the best stories on Lit. Seriously, if only most of the trash on this site was as gorgeous and full of depth as this one was. Well done!!
Gooood, this was so awesooooommmmeeee. The way you wrote is great! I would've enjoyed it more, though, if it was some kind of novel! Thank you for this reaaaaaddd!!!!
This was a novel. After reading this all night, i got myself a case of the flu. It was worth it though. All day I catch myself rethinking the scenes and it would still make my stomach drop due to emotions. The only thing I couldn't handle is the amount of torture like, no food and too much working her. Also that when Sasha gave Suzanne sanctuary in a cabin, she still didn't receive clothes. Serbia is flippin' cold man. Ugh. The ending was the cutest though.makes me want to have a Sasha. Which isn't healthy.... lol
I loved it but it felt rushed toward the end and I really wanted more to the story! Please add more!
THIS IS THE HOTTEST THING I'VE EVER READ PLEASE NEVER STOP WRITING
This was unbelievably hot! Seriously. The balance of noncon and consensual sex was unbelievably good. I read a lot and I write a bit as well. This story has me loving the characters and wanting more! Good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Sasha and Suzanne need to breed: they would be crazy parents!
The first time I read this story I was both shocked and turned on. The violence seemed to be a little too harsh but I love the control. I couldn't remember the name after and tried to find it several times but without success until I found it mentioned in AmoryParks' story... I am so glad that now I keep it saved :) My favourite story of all...
This is one of the best and erotic stories here that I've read!! Please continue writing :)
Honestly my favorite story I've read so far, loved it. Please write more!
This whole series is excellent. I'd love to see more written!
This story has been my favourite since I first read it about 4 years ago. The quality is all around great, and I LOVE that it is so harsh and grim.
You ever try to masturbate but you literally just can’t come? That was me two nights ago I was at it for 2 hours I was extremely horny but I couldn’t come. Theeennnn I read your story and boy my clit is still tingling from that orgasm. Thankyou
This story made me ache with desire.
That line : do you like being fucked by a killer... yes. So freakin hot. I’ll never be the same.
I have read this story through the years on and off. It is definitely one of my favorites! I'm not in to pain but it is so well written that I could see this story becoming a movie someday.
This has great visualizations and great Passion and I commend you for a very well written story!
I absolutely love Sasha as a character. Sadistic but loving and human. It's so easy to see the thoughts and feelings behind the actions described in this story, I love that about it. Great character development!
This is the first story I have finished reading even after I was finished!
I have been reading this story over and over for 6 years. PLEASE Please more!!!
good, missed a few salient points early on but made many later. I'll read more or your writings.
Excellent story—just finished my fourth read. I don’t typically enjoy stories featuring violence, but I definitely love your works.
This was.. so good! What the hell! I originally read this to gain some inspiration for writing smut with non-con, but jesus christ this was incredible. I loved everything about it! So well written.
I posted my first comment a little under ten years ago. A lot has changed in that time, but one thing that stays the same is my love for this story. It’s not often you find a story that feels like it was written specifically for all of your personal quarks and (good) triggers, and the fact that EVERYONE who has commented basically feels the same is a testament to furrybert’s talent. I fear the apocalypse, or an EMP that wipes out all electrical grids thereby rendering the internet lost forever, solely because it would mean never reading this story again 😆. I need to print it out just in case 😅.
This is one of my favorite stories. It’s not often for me to find one that I can read again and again and get the same tingles every time. Normally, I’ll find a story that I absolute love first time, but after that I get bored of it. Sometimes I can go a little longer if it’s a good story, but I always eventually get bored of it. However, I’ve read this story like 10 times now, and it’s still just as amazing and hot as the first time I read it. Like many other people in the comments, I’m not really into pain that much, but this was so well written that it didn’t even matter. This is now my go to story for whenever I need to come
I love this story so much, your stories in general are my go to when I need a little warm up. and I - my god I want Sasha to hold me down and whisper nasty things in my ear and do even nastier things to my body.
Please write more with sasha I don't care my h about Suzanne sasha is better written and the person I find makes it better it is soooooo good please write another sequel or a similar story because omg this is amazing
I telling this is the most incredible and VERY BEST STORY I HAVE READ ON THE INTERNET SERIOUSLY i absolutely loved it and hated for it to end
& this is the opinion of a female just so you know!!!
16 years since this was published and still waiting for the continuation!!! I go back to check through the years. PLEASE, PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY :( :( :( This is too brilliant
This story is riveting. It moves from pain to pleasure & back again in a heartbeat. The two dance around each other while this reader just wanted them to stop fooling themselves & get on with the loving. Well thought-out & well-written. More, please!
This was definitely one of the best noncon/reluctance story I have read on this or any other erotic platform. Like many other commenters, I too would love to read more of these two war time lovers. You can't write Sasha without Suzannr. Would love to see the two continue to fight for each of their sides of the war but continue to come together as lovers each time. Don't stop their pain/pleasure tormented love for one another.
Ok, this was the best piece of reluctant romance I've ever read. Well done author! Many thanks for your work!
Probably the very best Reluctant Romance or "Romance Kick-Started by Rape" I've ever read. It's an attraction built on genuine mutual respect and appreciation between two strong individuals, and not misplaced codependency between an edgy rapist and a doormat who falls in love with the first guy to give her orgasms. And there's actually a good reason here for her to overlook the rape. They're two soldiers on different side of the conflict and he's an interrogator, so his actions are par for course. This stands in contrast to stories about civilians, where the guy deliberately rapes for trash human reasons. And even when their feelings start to blossom, they don't instantly lose all reason. He protects her to an extent, but he still works hard to get the info he needs. She saves his life, but still still causes all his comrades to die. He understands her position, but he is still upset over the death of his comrades. The couple walk a rocky middle path instead of devoting completing to one side or the other. Fantastic.
One of the best enemies turned lovers story I've read in a while. I love...
Yo' this is surprisingly good. REALLY GOOD! Characters have great chemistry and the plot is awesome. Too bad it's too short. Anyone here who knows any novels with thisa kind of story?
masterfull Im no connoseur of this genre but I would not change thing and would be pressed to come up with an error
Retarded jacked up psychopath punches woman brutally in the head hundreds of times using all of his upper body strength which would have killed a woman in real life multiple times over.
Sheep in the comments: MEEEEEEHHHHHHH MEEHHHHHHHHH I LOVE THIS BAHHHHHH BAHHHHHH EVERYONE ELSE THINKS THIS IS SEXY AND EROTIC BAHHHHHHHHHHH PUNCHING WOMAN IN THE TEMPLE HARD ENOUGH TO CRACK HER SKULL IS GIVING ME A BONER BAHHHHHHHHH EVERYONE ELSE IS PRAISING A MURDERER IN THE STORY SO I MUST TOOO. BA...BAHHH R..RIGHT?
How much you wanna bet that these positive comments are all from people in that woke shithole called America. That's the only explanation i can think of for this shitty pathetic story that glorify extreme torture and beating up of a chained up helpless woman getting such glowing comments.
I have to agree with the guy below to a certain extent. I was fine with the story telling but the torture by viciously punching is just an instant turn off.
If you're not into it, you're not into it. Fantasies are fine as long as this kind of fantasy STAYS a fantasy. Dark romance and erotica are a genre and if you don't like it, don't read it. I liked the realism of their relationship not being immediately perfect, and how passion blurred with the aggression. Good job author ^^
I would like to weigh in on the punching thing.
That part WAS over the top and just too brutal to be considered as sexy or hot in any way. If you say you are into it because it is a fantasy then good, keep it that way. Just don't go beating the life out of your girlfriend or wife irl and it's all good bro.
I’m gonna agree with Suzanne & say the whole fighting scenario was ridiculous, LOL. The erotic & dominant side of it was pretty good, though!
I'm so very into every part of this. Please don't censor yourself for others. I, personally, got very turned on by the punching.
@aldergrove -: This the type of dude that will jizz his pants if you tie him down in a chair and beat the life out of him with a baseball bat. He did say he gets turned on by punching, only fair to show him what it feels like.
Weirdly satisfying story mixed with realistic, complex characters. I didn't think I'd enjoy this story from the description, but I did . Good job.
This is so hot except the parts where he’s punching her in the face. I get you are going for realism but it really squashed the erotica for me. But keep writing characters like Sasha! (Just ones that dont punch women).
I absolutely loved the story. It was so real & hot.
The point that they both had their jobs to do yet the had a connection and he came back to her after all this. Both the characters were strong. Much appreciated writing, and thankyou for such a story <3
I just got finished reading the entire story, this story is so bipolar, like one moment they're angry and fighting and she's getting beaten, then 1 second later he's fucking her and she's loving it. Like what the fuck? It was still hot though, 5 stars
Great story, keep writing stuff like this! It's so much more than simply erotica, also it's just the right amount of fucked up. I loved it.
I don't think that the punching was supposed to be hot. It's however much more realistic that he'd be punching her than spanking her, so I didn't mind it. It fit the story, whereas spanking would be unrealistic and cringey.
Wow, I mean it’s crazy but what an amazing story. The violence was bit too extreme for me, (no need for all the punching), but I guess you wanted their conflict to be realistic, and the build up of intensity in their relationship was just right. Can’t wait to see where this one goes next.
Definitely one of the better stories I've read here. I would love to hear what is next for the two leading characters, but would also be pleased to read what other story ideas you might have in mind. Thank you for sharing with us.
I LOVE THIS STORY OMG! I ENJOYED IT SO MUCH I STARTED SCREAMING AT OUT OF NOWHERE! PEOPLE NEED TO BE MAKING SPICY AND HOT STUFF LIKE THIS. I WANT MORE AGRESSION TO THOSE OTHER STORIES
Amazing erotic story. Sadistic, masochistic rape, yet romantic. What a combination! Love the story. 5 stars.
Very erotic story, quite brutal. If she is in love with her brutal rapist and torturer, she must be a masochist, a lover of painful sex and brutality. But there is a danger in falling for such a man. When the novelty of their sexuality starts to pall, there's no telling to which extent this brute will go to find pleasure.
Yessss I love it! Every part!
She can't turn off her feelings for him.
She hates him but she also longs for everything he does to her. What he brings out of her
Sasha's dominant side dominates, but deep inside him there is also a soft side.
That combination is very hot
Kitchy
Generally, I like the picture...
A war, a captured soldier, a sadistic guy tormenting his hostage...
But...I like my stories to at least try and sound realistic. A female soldier? No man endures beatings like that, let alone a woman. Plus, the author can't decide if his main female character is a strong one or a girlie-type. She on the other hand can't decide if it would be better to show her emotions to the bad guys or not and therefore meanders between her reactions.
I liked the violence, the domination and how he is pictured most of the time. But she was downright annoying. She could take the beatings but cried out in pain when simply being fucked.
Still...a hot story and the author knows his language.