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All Comments on 'Husband Saves the Day - and Weekend'

by Jay_Cameron

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

All 3 stories put up today by this new author were incoherent shit piles.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Bad idea, Terrible writing. Awful start to finish.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Lol good one 5 stars

Hornydevil47Hornydevil477 months ago

I bet that the two anon's below couldn't even write a story. Easy to criticise isn't it. Thanks for your writing, will carry on reading the rest of your stories. Good effort. Mel B known as Hornydevil47

FreedomBaseFreedomBase4 months ago

The ending seemed kinda 'blunt'. Overall, it's something new ~ as in a story with a plot I've never read before. Thank you for writing it.

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I'm a Seventy-nine-year-old man from Texas. I have spent my life just trying to get along. I won't piss off a cook by sending something back. I sometime enjoy a good argument. But if you don't like what I am writing ...you don't have to read it. I find interactions with peop...