All Comments on 'Hypnotic Pocket Watch Pt. 07'

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Ronin646 3 months ago

Great story and sad it's the end. Glad that Alan got Andrea at the end but my thoughts dwell on Rebecca. After the orgy with her and her daughters, she's never mentioned again. Sad, cause I hoped that Rebecca and Andrea would become great friends and share Alan. We all could use a sexy milf in our lives. Alas, I am not the author of this series; it's just my opinion. Keep writing, and I will keep reading. Thanks for continuing to write...

gem4tna 3 months ago

Could really use more chapters great story

Anonymous2 months ago

I loved it from start to finish.

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Everyone is a critic these days. If you don’t like the way the story reads then find one you do like or better yet, write your own. Enjoy, jerk off and have fun!

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