All Comments on 'Hypnotrack Ch. 14: The Girl's Plans'

by Verensei

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Personally I think you should go with “everything starts with good intentions” or as Batman would say it “you either die a hero or you live long enough to see yourself become the villain.”

He has a harem and each one should recruit 4 each. Mark just goes right “it makes the man happy” till yeah lol.

VerenseiVerenseialmost 2 years agoAuthor

Datum to consider: Mark has programmed himself to love anyone his harem video is used on.

And with what happened with Lisa and Nicole, has the delightful conflict of 'oh shit, what am I doing/why didn't I think of that' coupled with 'Wasn't it great! I love them both!'

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Would love to see more students from college and high school turn into bimbos

ElectricBadgerElectricBadgeralmost 2 years ago

Certainly hoping to see Marie’s sister involved, particularly if she retains a sense of disdain and disapproval of Marie, to heighten the sense of humiliation. Maybe for Brianna, too?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love this story, are there any plans to continue it? No pressure if not, just curious. Great work!

VerenseiVerenseiover 1 year agoAuthor

I'm *hoping* to get the next chapter up within the week.

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