All Comments on 'I Have a Secret Pt. 01'

Should have been longer.

The next one will be. I wasn't sure if people would like it. Will post part 2 soon.

A couple of unsolicited pointers. You’re writing in present tense. Past tense flows better. The chapter is too short - that rarely gets a good number of good reviews or comments. It flows well and has potential. M-M, even in the incest category, rarely gets high ratings. Keep writing. I’m looking forward to reading more.

You’ll get troll comments on here. Don’t let them dissuade you from continuing.

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About as bad as it gets, this site should have some quality control, some minimum standards to meet and then this story would never have seen the light of day.

I love your stories please keep writing