All Comments on 'I lost my Job Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Very promising start. An understandable change of life situation, his inclination for femdom, her inclination to use that, this could go far.

crimson2020crimson20206 months ago

Love your writing style it's like having chat with a mate 🤣. Definitely want more !!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Not to bad a story line. But who hasn't woke up to the fact that they went down on their girl, to find out she just started their period and she didn't know it. Not sure if I would like the idea that she tricked me in to going down on her when she knows that she's already on her period. Also you want to get someone to proof read your writings next time..

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I've been looking for this kind of story for ages and you're a great writer!

Thank you so much!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Please please write the next part already!

Thanks a million!

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