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Click hereI almost forgot about Lori. I guess I should say, Doctor Lori. Yes, she went ahead and is on her way to become a doctor. Lori and her boyfriend married and still live in Cleveland.
And what about Jason? Last I heard he moved to Chicago.
As for me? I got my blood pressure under control, and yeah, I have a full-blown case of type two diabetes. Hannah keeps me on the straight and narrow with diet and my medication. I also had two operations to fix the damage Moose did to my penis. I've had a hard time getting Hannah pregnant, but we'll keep trying.
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Hannah and I come back home on many occasions. We would walk up to the orchard hand-in-hand. We would watch the sun's rays throw long fingers of yellow light onto the apple trees. I would hold my wife, and felt the curve of her face in my hands. I could feel her heart beating.
There was that indescribable feeling of the warmth of Hannah's hand in mine. We'd sit on the old wooden bench in the orchard not only as survivors, but also as husband and wife.
I felt good. I felt loved by this woman 'cause I knew whatever life will hand us, she'll always catch me.
And I'll always catch her...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoReally need to not just drop and leave your readers wondering about things that you talked about through out your story Very good story till the end. Then you left us all hanging . Read what you wrote and you will see what i am talking about .Please finish with a beautiful ending for all characters please .
Anonymousabout 1 year agoAll i can say is BEAUTIFUL. I really loved the story .
My compliment to the author . Also you will find you
have more readers ho love this story .And very few whining
tit bags.
6Kingabout 2 years agoJim is a selfish dickbag throughout, and the author(12 yrs. old?) needs to back off on his hosiery/stocking fetish(in multiple stories) and STOP misusing the word "worst". Ever heard of "worse"? Lowering my rating to ⭐⭐
P.S. Learn to count, your chapter numbers are even messed up.
Anonymousover 2 years agoLots of drama.
Mr. Steward, you are a talented storyteller. And if you miss a typo or two you aren't alone!
Never mind perfectionists who don't write or edit. Please don't discard any stories. Thanks.
Rancher46over 2 years agoReally enjoyed this well written love story. Only disappointment was the Hanna wasn't pregnant at the end of the story. At any rate it gets my 5-star vote.
sber56over 2 years agoFirst, thanks for the story. Second, forget about the bitching and complaining on the spelling. I enjoy your stories, and your characters. Keep writing!
rwstewardover 2 years agoAuthorBoys and girls...
First you have to remember this is all free. I get no $$$ from these stories. They're free! All my stories I have posted except for one had been edited by a volunteer editor. That's free, too, and get what you paid for.
The last story I posted was nearly 50K words. That's a book! Everyone got it for free. And then people bitch if they find something wrong.
For those 'anonymous' posters that bitch and complain about the difference between quiet and quite, send me your email address and I'l be sure to forward you my next story. It takes months of part time work to put one of these together. After a while, all the words begin to blend together, and the spell checkers can't determine the difference between quiet and quite. I simply don't see the errors. Do you think I'd post stories knowing there are errors in it? Jesus, give me a fucking break!
If you don't like the plot or the characters, that's cool!
But don't get your panties in a knot if there is a 'her' instead of 'here' in the story. Again, anyone is free to edit my stuff before I post it.
I have two stories in the works. Frankly, I think I'll delete them and move on.
fredbrownover 2 years agoOkay, I read the entire "book" in one shot and enjoyed the heck out of it. I'm not much of a nerd so believe me when I say Moose would have known better than come near me - because if he had he would have died from lead poisoning in short order. Thanks for the read ......
