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by ILienBagby
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Anonymousabout 14 years agolooking fwd to the next one..... got me hard for sure ... love the character profiles....
Anonymousabout 14 years agoXanadu huh?
Well this is only chapter 1so maybe you will mention Olivia Newton_John soon. Nows theres a real goodess! I dont know what Xanadu is about either? I guess its just another version of paradise. Anyway I liked this and hope to hear what comes next!
Anonymousabout 14 years agoSpacing Needs Work
The story sounds very good, but the way your paragraph and sentence spacing is being shown does make it hard to focus on the story.
But am waiting for more.
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