All Comments on 'In Xanadu Ch. 01'

The story sounds very good, but the way your paragraph and sentence spacing is being shown does make it hard to focus on the story.

But am waiting for more.

Well this is only chapter 1so maybe you will mention Olivia Newton_John soon. Nows theres a real goodess! I dont know what Xanadu is about either? I guess its just another version of paradise. Anyway I liked this and hope to hear what comes next!

looking fwd to the next one..... got me hard for sure ... love the character profiles....