All Comments on 'Incestagram Ch. 07'

by CrazyTimesAHappenin

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Totally un-fricken believable at least try to write a story that sounds halfway real, Jeez

LapinatorLapinator7 months ago

You are building up all this sexual tension between dad and daughter and by now it's far beyond any plausibility that they haven't fucked each other yet. Even if they eventually do it, the payoff isn't worth the setup by now. Seven chapters of endless teasing (and it's getting repetitive) and he just came once in his pants I believe? He should be crawling on the floor in pain because of the most severe case of blue balls since the children of Adam and Eve said "Fuck it, we are going to do it anyway."

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

If you are going to write a story about a foreign county, at least know its laws.

The legal drinking age in Barbados is 18.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This is so bad. You started well, but now it's just terrible 😭😭. To many characters, so much teasing, and not fuck at all. 2/5

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This story Jumped the shark between chapters 3 and 4.

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