All Comments on 'Intimacy Pt. 06'

Breathtaking in its sensuality and beautifully written - as always. Brava!

I believe the jury has reached a verdict. Lot of fun reading/visualizing their exploration.

Marvellously captivating! The comparison of Caroline’s nipples to the dome of St Peter’s in Rome is breathtaking in its ability to conjure up a vivid picture of her body. Especially to those of us who have visited the Vatican frequently.

Pity. There was so much opportunity to develop the imagery but failed to deliver. I fear your style misses the mark both sexually and emotionally.

I hate to pigeon hole you but you write with the style of a bloke who has limited experience of life, love, anatomy and relationships.

One of my favourite stories by my very favourite author! 5-stars

To the anonymous coward: if you’re going to make these kinds of accusations you might at the very least do it in a more honourable way, rather than hiding behind your anonymity.

Don’t take it to heart Alice. All of us female writers get accused of being male!

I choose to write this anonymously so as not to get trolled.

This was a battle of the titans. So hot.