by Alice_Nicol
It's difficult to keep the interest up when you have two recurring characters, rather than the opportunity for thrills provided by new ones. Bearing this in mind, this is a superbly sensual and daring piece that presses all the right buttons.
Caught up in your “Intimacy” series — Eleanor’s journey — from the first really quite beautifully crafted piece/moment you shared with Kiera. In this piece, the reader is drawn in just as Eleanor is — can’t resist no matter how you play with the scene/action. Almost like you are toying with them/us all in a good way. Your characters engage in a crazy wedding night, erotically outrageous “battle” won by both. It’s the writing that is so entertaining.