All Comments on 'Intimacy Pt. 08'

by Alice_Nicol

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Jimbo_NamJimbo_Nam11 months ago

It's difficult to keep the interest up when you have two recurring characters, rather than the opportunity for thrills provided by new ones. Bearing this in mind, this is a superbly sensual and daring piece that presses all the right buttons.

Inthehole93Inthehole9311 months ago

God, I loves me a well used strap on!

MigbirdMigbird11 months ago

Caught up in your “Intimacy” series — Eleanor’s journey — from the first really quite beautifully crafted piece/moment you shared with Kiera. In this piece, the reader is drawn in just as Eleanor is — can’t resist no matter how you play with the scene/action. Almost like you are toying with them/us all in a good way. Your characters engage in a crazy wedding night, erotically outrageous “battle” won by both. It’s the writing that is so entertaining.

Paul_TwodayPaul_Twoday11 months ago

Dear old Hayden. Born to be a cuckold!

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