All Comments on 'IronMale's Defeat Pt. 02'

by Ironmale22

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great keep going but make them longer

Great storyline, one of the best I've seen for a while on here. But try to make your chapters longer.

Ironmale22Ironmale22about 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you. It's hard with the amount of "real" work I have. Sometimes short is all I have time for.

menon61menon61about 3 years ago

Good story so far, but longer and more sex would make it great.

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