All Comments on 'Isla and the Mermaid'

Nice first story.

A start, and the end? Just once? Where an you go from here. I'm excited to learn!

Cute and sexy! Great job :)

Excellent story, great description and characters, my only complaint is that it’s too short, definitely need a follow up as I’m presuming Isla is now “with mer-child”?

My other observation is that it’s written pretty much on the button, I didn’t trip over any spelling issues or missing/extra words from left over editing, that says good things about beta reading and edit process, well done, it’s an easy 5⭐️!

Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

P.S. please write the next part!