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Click here"That's all I have to say, but I ask that you listen to the words of Lee Greenwood, and summon memories of those days when we stood together."
The DJ cranked the amp, and the song spilled from the speakers so loudly it could be heard throughout the valley. I walked down the stairs, found Kaitlyn, Dos, and Grace, and huddled them around me.
If tomorrow all the things were gone
I worked for all my life
And I had to start again
With just my children and my wife
I thank my lucky stars
To be living here today
'Cause the flag still stands for freedom
And they can't take that away
And I'm proud to be an American
Where at least I know I'm free
And I won't forget the men who died
Who gave that right to me
And I'd gladly stand up next to you
And defend Her still today
'Cause there ain't no doubt
I love this land
God Bless the U.S.A.
When the final verse began, I led my family to our SUV, and we drove away.
And I'm proud to be an American
Where at least I know I'm free
And I won't forget the men who died
Who gave that right to me
And I'd gladly stand up next to you
And defend Her still today
'Cause there ain't no doubt
I love this land
God Bless the U.S.A.
We had made a statement tonight: who knows if we made a difference.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymous12 months agoI am sad that Ash is ending up with Clay. I thought Rob should end up with both Ash and Kaitlyn.
servant111about 1 year agoOK normally I absolutely love your stuff but this one has some real difficulties for me. First is Katylin’s portrayal. In this episode Katylin is frankly a uninhibited whore of the first magnitude. That is so disappointing because your previous work has always been framed around romantic love in a monogamous intimate relationships. The tales are center around this with the trials and all focused around the intimacy realising and/or recovering that basic relationship. Katylin in this episode is an unrepentant slut writ large. While she only has sex with her husband, she flashes in extreme exhibitionism, works hard to secure the new female pilot and is framed as a budding promiscuous lust volcano in the initial stages of explosive eruption. While I enjoy a good stroker, I find myself increasingly uninvolved with the romantic dynamic here as opposed to your previous work. Simply put Katylin is now a single dimension card board cutout. That is sad because this tale REALLY needs that strong romantic dimension.
Secondly the remainder of this episode is a no action ultra conservative political diatribe which is so over the top it is simply boring. Now I am an hard core conservative much further right than brother John Birch. I find that the unrelenting crescendo of you beating the reader to bits with the word or ultra patriotic stuff just makes the last half of this episode about as much fun as watching paint dry.
In short this who’s episode is a poorly written tortuous epic fail.
Sorry
2 stars
sempergumby1963over 1 year agoThere's some minor misspelled words that are just irritations because editing and spell check should have caught them, but still a good yarn. 5*
As far as political climate, it amazes me that the most patriotic thing I've seen in recent memory was done by a South African that spent 40+ billion so that everyone could stand in the electronic village square and have the opportunity for their ideas to be heard.
The censorship and banning of anyone go against the core of what this country is. So called journalists have failed to stand up in their profession and uphold the moral principles of a free press reporting to a free people.
Thank you Mr. Musk, for putting your money where your mouth is, and showing Americans what courage and commitment look like. Have a blessed day.
Texican1830over 1 year agoAuthorHomer - that a common attribution to Krushchev, but it’s false - he did not say that.
