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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Amazing plot

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

just another cheating asshole

chipmonk9chipmonk912 months ago

Can't wait for part 2

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Too many 'Wow's'!!

bbaron2274bbaron22746 months ago

Enjoyable start. Keep it up, if you can!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I read this and the chapters through Friday. Really bad dialogue and an unbelievable amount of sex. The sex became boring and there was nothing else in the story except sex.

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Just a guy who likes writing. Hope you enjoy it, any feed back is welcome.