by LoveLiterotica71
Thank you, this part fulfills the natural order of things as Alan and Victoria couple. I think the key phrase is "I love you Victoria" as Alan realized their connection. You write so well, thank you
Short, sweet but to the point. That about covers it. I hate it when wives cheat on good men that don't deserve being treated like that. Odd I guess considering how many affairs I've had with married women. I'm not a horrible hypocrite, all of their husbands treated them like carp and didn't deserve to so much as kiss their feet, but still. Anyway, you are managing to cram a lot of story into a small space. I look forward to reading more of your work as time passes and specially longer ones. Keep writing!
I love this story. It's amazing and incredibly written. Please hurry with the next installment. Five stars.
I love what you are doing and how you are handling it. Ignore the "anon" and write YOUR story. I know you've got the erotic mind and the capability to write a well stitched tale. Let it be you, let the others write their own stories. This initial coupling, after the mutual oral actions was so well done. I felt I was in the room with them. I can't wait to see more of this and more of what you have to offer.
First of all I read all three and they were Awesome :) how about making Vic pregnant and maybe a 3some with mom. Can't wait to read some more. Please don't make us wait too long.
Best story ever . Just a suggestion make so the mom comes back and find them in bed and they get in a big fight and moms lesbian things comes out and dad divorces her and settle down with the daughter thank you it was a good read so far kept it up